The characters were as happy as a kid in a candy store. Daffy Duck welcomed everyone to Disney World by his charming attitude. Mickey smiled as big as the sun after it comes out in the morning. Minnie stayed by Mickeys side like a soldier at war. Minnie has ears the size of an elephants. That didn't matter though because Mickey still loved Minnie. Goofy was as crazy as a monkey at the zoo. Goofy giggled like the Gerber Baby. He could never stop. Pluto was Goofys best friend and vice versa. They both loved each other with a passion. Alvin and the Chipmonks voice was as high as a boy that hasn't gone through puberty. Shame on them! The sky in the distance stood out like a sore thumb. It was as blue as the ocean water. The sound of Walt Disney World was loud with rides going wild. People were chatting up a storm which also added to the sound of the park. Hot, fried food blew through the air like a baloon taking off into the sky. The feeling of Walt Disney World raced through ones veins like the speed of lighting!
2 comments:
I really liked some of your similes, like "Goofy giggled like the Gerber Baby," "Mickey smiled as big as the sun," and "food blew through the air like a balloon." But you used a few cliches like "sore thumb" and "up a storm." It's good that you came up with similes to describe every character, but I think you used too many - it's gets kind of distracting. I like how you described the whole park as well as the characters - it helped to develop the setting.
The thing that you did very well was the similies. But I would have to agree that you used to many similies. It Just got a little to many. I realy liked the discriptions of the disney characters.
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